martes, 19 de abril de 2011

Correction of Gricel's Post

The best concert in my life was the "tour in rainbows" of the band Radiohead in 2009. I saved a lot of money all the (NN) year to go. The concert was realized (WE) Taked  on March 26 in the National Stadium. The show was attended for (WW) by 26.000 fans. I went with my twin Natalia and I met with my sociology teacher Larenas!!!
Radiohead
went (WW) came to Chile to promote their last disc "In Rainbows" with songs like: Faust Arp, House of Cads and
The band consist of Thom Yorke, Jonny and Collins Grenwood, Ed O´Briden and Philip Selway.
I am
(SM) a fan since 2005 when for (SM) the first time (SM) I heard a song (Creep) in the radio and I loved it.
I enjoyed very much the concert because was a wonderfull show with ligths and
effects fantastics.(WO) Fantastics effects

I decided to go to the event because I like
very much (WO)  their music and their song very much. But the most important is that I love Thom Yorke!!!!.

I am
exainting (SP) Exciting because Radiohead come for the next Lollapaloza.

This is my favorite song "No surprises"
"A heart that's full up like a landfill a job that slowly kills you bruises that won't heal
You were so tired happy bring down the government they don't they don't speak for her
I'll take the quiet life a handshake of carbon monoxide
No alarms and no surprises no alarms and no surprises
No alarms and no surprises
Silent silent

This is my final fit my final bellyache with
No alarms and no surprises no alarms and no surprises
No alarms and no surprises, please

Such a pretty house, such a pretty garden
No alarms and no surprises, no alarms and no surprises
No alarms and no surprises, please"


SP: Spelling   P: Punctuation  WW: Wrong Word      SM: Something Missing   NN: Not needed          WT: Wrong Tense     WF: Wrong form     WO: Wrong Order      WE: Wrong expression

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